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One sunny day me and I woke up on a beautiful sunny day. So  we woke up we drank tea and afetr drinking tea. We went to take a shower we had each turn. After showing up we looked for our clothes and then we found our clothes and we went and changed.After we changed we put on our shoes and prayed to ask the lord to procert us  throughout the  day.After praying we went to hibiscus cost.It was a long rideI was with my parents and brother.We went on double bus and we went right up and went to the first chair.And the sun was shining on my lap, And my lap was red and it was so sour. We ate on the way  to the place we were going to. When we got off we took a photo.And we went to order food and my parents went to the supermarket. And me and my brother. While we were waiting we played a game for just a minute. The girl from the shop came and gave us the food that we ordered. And then my parents came out of the supermarket. They came and so we held on to the food. And then we saw a park near us so we went there and we had to cross the road. And we saw a bench near the park. So we put the food down and opened the paper and there was fish and chips and bbq and fries and a big coke. So we prayed and  ate the food. The food was yummy. After me and my brother and my dad went to the  park there was a  big field and there were people playing  rugby and practicing kicking. So we played on the playground and it was fun. And then it started raining. We still played and it got sunny when it started to rain again, we went back to my mum. We packed up and went to catch the bus. There was a bus there that was going to the city so we got on. When we hopped on the bus it started to rain hard. And it rained so much that we were almost at the city where the rain stopped. And we stopped at the bus stop. We got off and went to the 762 that goes to Glen innes. And then we reached home we took a shower and went  to pray and went to sleep.